Our Love Epilogue I

You did quite well to hide the pain
you said never to expect I will care again
if you just need a helping hand
I’ll offer both of them I don’t mind
but if you seek a place to cry on
I not going to lend my shoulders to cry upon
I won’t be tempted and I am not willing
to invoke those familiar forgotten feelings

The stars still shine in your eyes
but now they belonged to the skies
and as the trees reach out for the sun above
please reach out to him for renewed love
if our love ceases to be
its not the end of the world for me
I’m sure you knew these words
from our song that will no longer be heard

its my fervent hope that everything would work out fine
salvage your life don’t worry about mine
get back to him he’s your man
I’m the one you have left behind
I beg of you my sacrifice don’t let it be in vain
just let me to do my crying in the rain !

Panduan Untuk Menulis Poem

. Pilih thema dan buat rangka idea
. Putuskan berapa panjang @ rangkap
. Pilih satu idea central eg Frustration, love, parting ,frienship
dan kemudian develop the idea

. cari dan atur few key words berkenaan thema tadi yang sama rythym atau similar soundings. eg love,move,dove,glove most aloof both rain main vain train grain pain Then pilih the most probable words yang nak di gunakan dan experiment buat ayat ayat using those words at the end of key sentences poems tak perlu sama sounding at the end of sentences tapi kalau boleh create lebih power!

Create the poem from the basic framework then add on bit by bit until sounds fine.

Ok Ila pick and choose from the poems and ubahsuai atau change thema untuk melambangkan other ideas. Gender kena tukar kalau di pakai eg man >>woman. Happy poeming!! Ahakksszz!!

Our Love 4

My dear ! why do I
Worry about the tears in your eyes
It makes me wonder makes me weak
To see tears flowing on your lovely cheek
I’m still loving you
Like I always do
Wanting your loving touch
To be with you so much

If others have been telling you lies
Please seek the truth hiding in my eyes
If they keep telling you
that I’ve fallen out of love with you-
My dear I thought you knew
that's something I will never do.

Our love will never perish
If its in our hearts to cherish !

Dont Worry

Our worst imaginations almost never happens
most worries die in anticipation
why should we worry sometimes in vain
it aren’t no use putting up your umbrella until it rains

Your worry about tomorrow is not here yet
don’t be afraid of the day you have never seen
worry holds you back from trying to get
and from reaching destinations that you have never been

if you cant help worrying remember
worrying can’t help you either
don’t ride a rocking chair
it keeps you going
but you don’t get anywhere

not everything that is met can be changed but yet
nothing can be changed until it is met
I’m sticking to the fight when hardest hit
When things seem worse I will not quit !!

faith ends where worry begins
worry ends where faith begins
worrying now I’m not
so I’m exercising my faith in God


JUST DO IT WITH WHAT YOU HAVE !

The Sea - The Love

You are the ocean
And the sea
That send waves of love
Rolling over me

I’m the shore
Waiting for the waves of love
To embrace me more

Your love is the gentle breeze of the sea
Whispering thoughts of yearnings
Across my face
Gently caressing my every being
From place to place


The wind of love
Is blowing in my heart again
It's opening for you
so just follow the wind
And please come in
That's all you have to do

Where the sands of love touch the sea
where the waves of tenderness never part
Love would you now be nice and kind to me
because I'm tired of broken hearts

I will gaze longingly at the sea
To bring the love destined for me !

Our Love 3

A man they say should never cry
of tears his eyes should be dry
but our love that has been living in your mind
is dying and so unkind
My heart is bleeding
and my resolve is weakening


I’ve heard what had been told
and what had been said
those memories are
still very clear in my head

To the end of eternity we’ll never part
of me till the end of time you will adore
but why oh why when I looked into your heart
our love it seems to be not there anymore?

Is our love breaking apart ?
could we end up with shattered hearts ?
I’m sure we both
know the true worth
of hurting and forgiving
of hoping caring and mending

Our love I’m sure you know
with bloom and grow
we will renew our vows again
our love till the end of time it will remain !

Our Love II

The sands of time kept on funneling
stirring poignant memories
exploring long forgotten feelings
whiffs of despair drifting
across the expanse of loneliness
the journey of love
you begun in earnest

The legacy of love you left
was illusory
a medley of sadness
full of melancholy
perfidious promises
your images of life a mimicry
your vows of faithfulness a mockery

The sands of time trickled slowly
you’ve left me all lovelorn and forlorn
whilst you continue with your sojourn

When the sands of time are all blown away
our love will never again hold sway
the hurts and the pains
will start all over again
when all the traces of our love are all gone
its time for me to soldier on

What will be left with me at best
are the remnants of our tryst
and the lingering memories
of our love not meant to be !

Our Love

Once I was your sweetheart
you said we will never part
now I’m just a friend
of our love I will just pretend
I can try as a man should
not to cry as a man would
it’s very hard to laugh off the tears
the hurt the longings and the fears
I will go on wandering
stepping outside
the door to loneliness
that you opened wide


I still would love you so
wherever you go
though you will never know
cause our friends they still believe
our love is very much aglow

You’re dancing on clouds of happiness
with the stars in the sky
those clouds are my clouds of despair
and I’m left pondering why
our love our future
our present our past
our love our secret
wonder how long will it last ?

The Rain

The Rain.....the beginning


it was drizzling when I saw you first
it was raining when we met
it was pouring when we fell in love
we were happy but very wet
the clouds were bright
the rainbows were beautiful
as I held your hands tight
our love it was wonderful

it was raining when we parted
there were dark clouds in the sky
it was raining when you left me
when you turned and said "good-bye"

you are no longer mine
our love has been torn apart
though the clouds drifted and the sun began to shine
its still raining in my heart!!





The Rain - The Meeting



hello!! its years since we met
its years since we last chat
I took it very hard
on that rainy night
when we had to part

yes I do think of you
when I'm feeling blue
but now I'm fine
with this life of mine

is that your little girl ?
she looks a lot like you
and look at the cute dimples
like her mother she has those too

I touch her hair and those lovely curls
"dear where's your dad?"
hmmm! why did your little girl
looked at me like that?

I watch a teardrop
slowly trace its way down your soft cheek
my heart nearly stopped
I asked in dismay an answer did I seek

of our love what had been done and said
are you happy with that decision you have made ?


The Rain - The Feelings



We waved our goodbyes
I kissed your little girl
with her lovely dimples
and her bewitching charms
I barely felt your tender touch
when it brushed
against my arms

I felt the lonely message
it was trying to impart
the crying of a tortured soul
the wretchedness of a lonely heart

I thought you would be happy
As it was your fervent wish
you’ve chosen your destiny
to be his in wedded bliss

your eyes your heart your soul
is no longer the happy lass of old
I felt for you my heart is saddened
maybe your life is no longer
in seventh heaven

I’m no longer your lover
Nor a savior for a neglected wife
I’m now just a mere spectator
In the unfolding drama of your life


Please remember …
On the rainy day that we part
you took from me
the key to your heart



The Rain Epilogue I

You did quite well to hide the pain
you said never to expect I will care again
if you just need a helping hand
I’ll offer both of them I don’t mind
but if you seek a place to cry on
I not going to lend my shoulders to cry upon
I won’t be tempted and I am not willing
to invoke those familiar forgotten feelings

The stars still shine in your eyes
but now they belonged to the skies
and as the trees reach out for the sun above
please reach out to him for renewed love
if our love ceases to be
its not the end of the world for me
I’m sure you knew these words
from our song that will no longer be heard

its my fervent hope that everything would work out fine
salvage your life don’t worry about mine
get back to him he’s your man
I’m the one you have left behind
I beg of you my sacrifice don’t let it be in vain
just let me to do my crying in the rain !



The Rain - Final Episode



once i was in your heart
now someone else holds tha key
since that rainy day we part
i've resigned to my destiny

it's all over
did'nt even cry
i just stopped living
when you said goodbye
1 woul'nt start all over again
cause i could'nt stand the pain

i must accept you love him more than me
so with my broken heart i've accepted it gracefully
i hurt too much to face this situation
then you're happy that's my only consolation
if his love is true
he will take good care of you

thank you for the special gift
and thank you for that letter
i'm so very please
to know your life has turned for the better

now the last chapter has been written
all episodes shall be closed
nothing to yearn nothing more to happen
only wonderful remembrances of our love

a loving kiss for the lovely daughter
glad she be soon be having a little brother
i will say my final goodbye and please remember
we will be out of each other's heart forever !!

Minah Perasan

name aku Minah
aku ade balak
name balak aku Mat

kitorang dah lame kenal
dah lama saling sayang menyayang
kalo lepak same2 pon kadang2 dah naik bosan
tapi satu hari tu
kitorang keluar laa jalan2 macam biase
tapi aku terase lain macam sket
si Mat bawak aku pegi kedai emas
die nak beli cincin
hadiah untuk kakak die katenye

lpas tu die bawak pegi kedai baju pengantin
nak usha2 baju utk kakak die jugak katenye
aku pon ikut je laaa
tapi si Mat beriyer tanye aku yang mane yang aku
paling suka

lpas tu, kitorang pegi kedai bunga
Mat beli sejambak bunga ros merah
pun untuk kakak die jugak katenye
aku pon malas laa nak tanye banyak2
same je jawapan die dari tadi

tak lama lpas beli bunga tuh
tibe2 Mat berenti..
dier berdiri tegak memandang ke arah aku..
mukanya agak kemerahan
panas kot

tapi die senyum2..
dan tunduk memandang kasut sendiri
tibe2 die 'go down on one knee'
maka secara automatik aku pon teringat laa lagu
avril "i want to see you go down on one knee..marry me
today..."

Mat memanggil nameku..
"Minah..."
sambil menghulurkan cincin dan bunga ros tadi
aku terdiam....
aku terpaku di situ...

perasaanku mula bergelora
sudah terbayang pelamin indah tempat kami
bersanding
tiba2 terbayang keluarga dan anak2
tanggungjawab yang berat terhadap keluarga
sudah bersediakah aku...?

tetapi aku gembira
dalam tak sedar, airmataku mengalir perlahan di
pipi

Mat masih tunduk...
die memanggil namaku lagi skali
"Minah..."

dalam tangisan kegembiraan aku menoleh ke
arah Mat
dan pada masa yang sama juga Mat mendongak
memandang ke arahku
mata bertentang mata..
mat bersuara...

"Laaaa..ni apsal nangis2 nih?? Tetibe je..gile ape??
Dah laaa orang panggil banyak kali tak jawab..
tolong laaa pegang bende2 ni jap..aku nak ikat
tali kasut nih..cepat laaa..panas
nih..ishhhh..susah btol orang sentimental nih..."

Dan aku pon meraung bagai nak gile
malunye aku
hampeh ko Mat..bile nak masuk minang nih..??

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